I still look forward to seeing the author shine on the last one but please don’t rush and don’t ruin it with the unnecessary and painfully vanilla sex.She remembered the words she had whispered to him in the back of the limo after La Rose. At the end of the day the book was very rushed and choppy. Persephone needs to stop saying cheesy lines that have crickets playing, and we need to feel her potential. We need more action and details on things and not have it so choppy. I love a good cliffhanger though, but I crave so much more from this book. It felt very rushed and a lot of characters were just forgot and not acknowledged right when bad things happened to them. I don’t feel fear or power in anything he does Fourth: And lastly….this book has so much potential and an amazing story line that just keeps getting ruined. He only sensed her ring but has said before he can just sense her in general.
At this point it just feels like all bark and no bite. Third: Hades is not giving the “all powerful” feeling he claims to have. At the end she showed some strength and skill but come on how are you supposed to be the most powerful god but can’t stop some demigod from cutting your friends finger? There is so many things she could of done to stop everything from happening at the end. You are supposed to be all powerful badass but instead you wine and complain and act weak instead of getting the business done. Like come on… you don’t know if your friends are dead or alive and all you want to do is have sex? Second: Persephone is so whiny. Hundreds of people die, her friends are in danger and she doesn’t know if they are actually okay but instead of checking on them, helping them continue to fight, or process what happened they begin having sex. It got to the point that I was mad at them always having sex after bad things happen. First: the sex is WAY too much and unnecessary. So much potential if Persephone actually stops whiningįirst time I’ve ever written a review and so I had to because this book has brought out some frustrations.
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